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Grant came home
exasperatingly late. He had opted to
leave his phone in the car before stopping in the bar for a drink or
five. The bartender had sent him walking home again, and Carrie was in no
mood for his excuses when he finally staggered in.
She sent him to sleep on the
couch, knowing better than to discuss important matters with someone who was
that ridiculously drunk, then went to bed early, unsure what else to do with
herself in the dark, empty house. She assured herself that the twins were
safe, and that Grant would be fine once he slept off that heavy stout he
insisted on drinking. She only needed to worry about herself for a
change, and so she fell against the pillows and stretched around them until she
was selfishly comfortable. It felt nice taking all of the sheets, and as
she lay in the king-sized bed, she felt herself begin to relax. She
closed her eyes, smiling at the prospect of finally getting a good night’s
sleep.
She sat up when Grant entered
with a knock.
He looked even paler than
before. Sweat beaded down the sides of his face. “I’m going to be
sick,” he said before he bent over and vomited a thick, black sludge onto the
carpet. He gagged as the dark mass continued to exit his body in violent,
regurgitating spasms.
“How much did you drink?” she
asked, heading down the hall to get some towels.
“I’m feeling much better
now. I’ll be fine. I’m just going to go back to the couch,” he said
while he stumbled back to the living room.
She cleaned as much as she
could, gagging at the black, thick goo that had become embedded in the
carpeting. She threw the towels immediately into the washing machine to
soak. She looked down, surprised to find herself covered in the oily
black substance.
She fought the impulse to
scream and curse, and decided instead to use the mess as an excuse to take a
dip in the hot tub. The kids were gone and she didn’t care if anyone else
saw her. She turned it on, pulled off the heat-sealing lid, and stripped
completely naked before slipping chest-deep into the clear, hot water.
She closed her eyes, feeling
tired and peaceful, letting her mind drift and her worries dissolve with her
fading thoughts. She smelled a sudden, heavy scent of pine right before a
paralyzing spell held her nearly motionless in the water. Her eyes
snapped open, and her heart beat wildly against her tight chest as she found
the water had gone black and opaque. She tried to stand, but her limbs
failed her. She feared she might slip under the water’s surface and
drown, and she tried to call for help, but she couldn’t summon the breath.

Again, she tried to cry out,
but her body refused to heed. Just faintly, but growing stronger by the
moment, she could feel the presence of her intruder tapping into her thoughts,
and she could feel the creature stretching through her body, reaching
formlessly through the framework of her nervous system, melding with other
vital reaches of her body. She could only bear witness to the puppet it was
turning her into, feeling it begin to control her arms and legs, and even her
facial expressions. It held her paralyzed, making her a prisoner in her
own skin.
This isn’t really happening, she thought,
struggling to shake her terror. She tried to will it away, to force her
body back under her control, but she could not. This isn’t really happening!
The creature writhing within
her practiced maneuvering Carrie’s arms and legs, looking around and blinking
her eyes. It relaxed back, floating in the light current.
What’s going on? Carrie thought, as she could no
longer prompt her body to speak.
“Lovely night for a soak,
isn’t it?” the creature said, using her voice.
What’s happening to me?
“Doesn’t this water feel
fantastic?” The creature moved Carrie’s back along a hot jet of water.
Please let me go!
The creature simply laughed.
Please!
“What’s the best thing you’ve
done with this body?”
Her mind flashed to that
fateful night when a couple had pulled her into their private shoot. She
had thought to back out before it was too late, but they had been so
persuasive. Suddenly, her clothes were
on the ground and she was in the midst of a threesome involving sex toys and
outrageous bodily positions. Even more disturbing was that she had taken
the extra money they had offered her at the end of the “shoot.” They had
seen her as a glorified whore, and she had taken their money because she
couldn’t afford not to.
She had gone to Grant
immediately, and at first, she had thought he might strangle her in his rage.
Then, strangely, he had stood, slumped like a little boy, broken and empty,
barely able to speak. He had turned away from her in a way that had put
her in tears, the weight of his anger nearly enough to crush her. With
the added weight of her own guilt, she felt as though she had to drag herself
into their new life here in South Bend . . . along with a resentful yet devoted
husband and two teenagers who hated everything about everything.
Again, the creature laughed.
I’ve finally lost it, Carrie thought. Just like
Mom. It was inevitable, I suppose.
“I’m no case of Alzheimer’s,” it replied with chilling certainty. “I’m something much, much worse.” The creature floated on her back, and together they looked up at the stars.
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